Lightning Star female

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Name: Lightning Star
Gender: Female
Breed: Clydesdale x American Paint (Medicine Hat)
Genetics:
Age: 3 years
Arrived in MUSTANG: Summer, 2014
Coat Color: Chestnut Sabino with white mane and tail
Height: 16.1hh
Eye Color: Blue

Personality: She is a gentle natured young mare who doesn't like seeing any horse bullied often placing herself in front of the one being bullied to protect them. She is always into general mischief when she thinks no other horses are watching.  She often gets caught in the process and gets kicked to the outer edges of her home herd. She does take off for a few days for time to herself when she needs to get away from her mother who likes to keep her close. She is the only Medicine hat filly in her herd and they are overly protective of her, she often finds it suffocating as they watch over her to make sure she is healthy and has enough food. She resents having the constant close watch on her. She does not understand why they watch her constantly. She wants a life where she is able to choose her own path's and not have her herd decide what she is allowed to do.

History: Lightning Star was born into a herd that had mostly bay or dun colored mares. Her sire is a Clydesdale who used to be a human pet. She tries to live up to her father's expectations but more often then not she gets into too much trouble and only earns disapproving looks from him. She tries hard to be a respectful horse but her half sisters and brothers constantly pick on her for her bigger size and when she picks on them back they complain to her father leaving her to try and explain things. She is unaware of her parents plans to give her to a Stallion who is not very nice to his herd mares, they have been kicked too often when they were pregnant causing the loss of their foals.
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From a rating of one to ten [ten being the best], what would you rate MUSTANG?: 10
What do you suggest we do next/improve?: nothing
Where did you find us?: was looking for games on yahoo
What would you like to be called?: Star
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[Kezz]

Welcome to MUSTANG!
Your application is accepted.

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Hey there! A couple things on your application must be rectified before I can accept it.

Firstly: with those breeds, your mare cannot be 17.3 hands. The American Paint Horse average height is about 15 hands, the average Clydesdale is about 17.2 hands. Therefore I would recommend a more realistic height at 16.1. Thanks =]

Secondly: If you could list her exact colour that would be great, as just 'red and white' isn't enough. I'm assuming you mean chestnut, and then her exact marking type - i.e. tobiano, overo, sabino, splash etc.

Thanks again.